“The Nectar of Mañjuśrī’s Speech: A Detailed Commentary on Shantideva’s Way of the Bodhisattva (Byang chub sems dpa’i spyod pa la ‘jug pa’i tshig ‘grel ‘jam dbyangs bla ma’i zhal lung bdud rtsi’i thig pa)” — Khenpo Kunzang Pelden; translated by the Padmakara Translation Group, Shambhala 2007 (paperback 2011).
Provenance
Khenpo Kunzang Pelden (Kunzang Chödrak; “Khenpo Kunpal,” 1862–1943) is the compiler rather than the author in the usual sense — see Khenpo Kunzang Pelden. The colophon is explicit: the commentary is built from the detailed notes Kunpal took during a six-month exposition of the Bodhicaryāvatāra given by his teacher Patrul Rinpoche (Orgyen Jigme Chökyi Wangpo) at Chökhor Gegong, supplemented by notes from a forty-day course given by Patrul’s heart-son Önpo Tendzin Norbu (received twice) and by the spoken explanations of other close disciples. Patrul Rinpoche used Ngulchu Thogme Zangpo’s Kadampa commentary as his basic text. The work was commissioned by Kathok Situ Chökyi Gyatso and pressed to completion by Shechen Gyaltsap Rinpoche. It is the most widely studied Nyingma commentary on the Bodhicaryāvatāra and is, in effect, “the commentary that Patrul Rinpoche so often gave by word of mouth but never wrote” (Translators’ Introduction).
The single most important fact for the wiki: by the translators’ own statement, “the presentation of the ninth chapter on wisdom follows closely, very often verbatim, Mipham’s commentary, the famous Norbu Ketaka [the Nor bu ke ta ka*], which was itself closely modeled on Patrul Rinpoche’s own teaching.”* This makes the chapter-9 material a primary witness to Mipham’s reading of the prajñā-perfection chapter — the high-priority addition target flagged on the Bodhicaryāvatāra page’s open questions. Kunpel is also the same compiler (with Kathok Situ) of Mipham’s Madhyamakāvatāra commentary already in the wiki (mipham-introduction-middle-way-2002), so the two sources are products of one editorial hand inside the Mipham–Patrul Nyingma circle.
The commentary is structured around the sabche (sa bcad, textual outline) for each chapter, never exceeding seven textual levels. It is deliberately a word-for-word commentary “of interest for beginners,” avoiding long scholarly disquisitions and quotations — the Patrul Rinpoche register of practice over erudition.
Thesis / main argument
Chapter-by-chapter walk-through of the root text: see the Bodhicaryāvatāra text page (under the wiki author’s instruction the root-text walk-through lives on the text page; a commentary-level summary in
wiki/summaries/is not yet written and remains a future task).
The commentary’s governing claim — set by Śāntideva at BCA 9.1 and adopted by Kunpel following “the interpretation of the Lord Mañjughoṣa our teacher” (i.e. Mipham) — is that the entire path-treatise is subordinated to the perfection of wisdom: “all these branches of the Doctrine” (the five preceding perfections) “were expounded by the Sage for the sake of wisdom.” Wisdom (the realisation of emptiness) is “the main and indispensable aspect of the path”; the other five perfections “when seized by wisdom… lead to omniscience” but “without wisdom… are deprived of sight” (Ratnaguṇasaṃcayagāthā). The frame is therefore explicitly that of Provisional and Definitive teaching: chapters 1–8 are the skilful-means register, chapter 9 the prajñā-perfection register that completes them.
Crucially for the wiki, the commentary closes the same loop Śāntideva opens: realisation of emptiness is taught for the sake of compassion. Citing Atiśa and the Bodhicittavivaraṇa (“emptiness with the essence of compassion”), it states that “the realization of emptiness occurs simultaneously with the birth of compassion,” and the chapter ends (vv. 151–167) with a long meditation on how seeing phenomena as empty issues directly in great compassion for beings who suffer through their belief in true existence. This is framework-as-pedagogy in its purest Mahāyāna form: the metaphysics of chapter 9 is instrumental to the soteriology of the whole.
Key claims (chapter 9, following Mipham’s Norbu Ketaka)
Two methods of positing the two truths (commentary on BCA 9.2)
The commentary states two distinct ways the Madhyamaka divides the Two Truths:
- By examination of the ultimate status of phenomena: “the way phenomena appear is their relative truth; the way they actually are is their ultimate truth.” (The appearing mode / abiding mode division — snang tshul / gnas tshul.)
- By examination of the relative status (the way phenomena appear): “when subject and object appear in such a way that there is a discrepancy between the way they appear and the way they really are, this is the relative truth. By contrast, when subject and object appear in accordance to the way they actually are, this is the ultimate truth.”
The second method is a subject-side / cognitive-perspective construal: the truths are sorted by whether appearance matches reality for a given cognising subject. This is direct primary-text grounding, from the Nyingma side, for the object-side / subject-side distinction this wiki draws at , and it sits alongside Mabja’s twelfth-century cognitive-perspective gloss and the Ninth Karmapa / Dzongsar Khyentse subject-side coalition. (It also names “the Svātantrika Madhyamikas insist on separating the two truths” as the residual fault of the lower Madhyamaka — the same diagnosis Mipham gives at the verse level in mipham-introduction-middle-way-2002.)
The two truths are a teaching-device with no ultimate standing (commentary on BCA 9.106)
The strongest single framework-as-pedagogy datum in the source. Answering the objection that if nothing arises or ceases the relative truth collapses and the two truths reduce to one, the commentary replies: “the system of the two truths is propounded solely for didactic purposes, as an entry to the path. On the ultimate level, the division into two truths has no place.” On the ultimate level there is “only the inconceivable dharmadhātu, pure suchness”; the twofold division holds only on the relative level, where there is a real difference between how things appear and how they are. The two-truths apparatus is explicitly upāya, not ontology — the precise content this wiki’s framework-as-pedagogy specification requires (and which the Oetke-style framework-as-formalism reading lacks).
Personal and phenomenal no-self are “of one taste” (commentary on BCA 9.40–56)
In the “supremacy of the Mahāyāna” section the commentary argues, against the śrāvaka claim that liberation is reached through personal no-self alone, that “there is no difference at all between these two assertions of emptiness: that of the personal No-Self and that of the phenomenal No-Self.” Personal no-self is the no-self of one phenomenon (the person imputed on the aggregates); phenomenal no-self is the same emptiness extended to all imputed wholes (body, pot). “The only difference… lies in the thing considered to be empty.” The realisation that uproots affliction is the realisation of phenomenal emptiness; śrāvaka arhats who reject it retain a non-afflictive ignorance, take subtle mental bodies, and are not finally liberated until they enter the Mahāyāna. This is the Nyingma articulation of the universal-emptiness extension — and it is the precise point at which Williams defects (he accepts personal-level Reductionism but refuses to extend niḥsvabhāva to the dharmas). The commentary also (following Mipham) notes that the authenticity of vv. 49–51 has been questioned.
Clinging to emptiness must itself be relinquished (commentary on BCA 9.32–34)
The four-extremes culmination, load-bearing for two argument pages. On v. 32: meditating on dependent origination, one concludes “that even the conviction in the unreality of phenomena is merely one thought supplanting another, and… cannot in itself be the true mode of being.” On v. 34: “when neither the thing (to be negated) nor the nonexistence of the thing… are present to the mind, no alternatives for true existence remain (in terms of being both… or neither…). Consequently, the mind has no other object to fix on, no ideas like ‘It is empty’ or ‘It is not empty.’ All conceptual activity is brought to complete stillness.” Cited in support: MMK (“not through mind’s construction can it be constructed… free of thought, beyond distinctions”); the Prajñāpāramitā “those who ‘have a view’ of voidness, / Are barred… from its accomplishment”; Nāgārjuna’s Lokātītastava on relinquishing even the clinging to voidness. This is a primary-text witness, from the Nyingma side, both for the fourfold negation requirement and for Gorampa’s “grasping emptiness is itself a failure to negate” inversion.
The proofs of emptiness as the three doors of liberation (commentary on BCA 9.116–150)
The commentary runs the standard Madhyamaka reasonings and explicitly maps them to the three doors of liberation: analysis of cause (the diamond-slivers / rdo rje gzegs ma: refutation of uncaused origination against the Cārvākas, of production from a permanent cause against Īśvara/the theists, of self-production against the Sāṃkhya satkārya doctrine) yields signlessness; analysis of nature (the great-interdependence argument, vv. 143–144) yields emptiness; analysis of result (the existent/non-existent-effect argument, vv. 145–150) yields wishlessness/“beyond expectancy.” A clean Indian-primary-text instance of the Five Great Reasonings deployed as a convergent toolkit subordinated to a soteriological end.
Other notable chapter-9 moves
- Cittamātra refutation (vv. 15–29): the mind cannot cognise itself (“the sword’s edge cannot cut itself, the finger-tip cannot touch itself, the acrobat cannot climb on his own shoulders”; Ratnacūḍaparipṛcchā); the self-illuminating-lamp analogy and the lapis-lazuli analogy refuted; the memory argument (water-rat venom example) answered; True-Aspectarian and False-Aspectarian sub-schools each refuted. BCA 9.29 (“if the mind is without a perceived object, it is empty also of a perceiving subject… all beings would be Buddhas from the very beginning”) is the verse at which, by tradition, Śāntideva and Mañjuśrī rose into the sky.
- No-self compatible with karma and compassion (vv. 70–77): karmic continuity is carried by “a single mental continuum” that is a mere label (“like a garland… it does not actually exist as such”), not a self; compassion has no ultimate object or agent yet operates undeniably at the level of appearance (“beings… have no existence in an ultimate sense… yet in the perception of beings all these things do exist”). The Madhyamaka answer to the “no self → no one to liberate” objection.
- Buddha-activity without thought (vv. 35–39): the wish-fulfilling jewel and the garuḍa-pillar of the brahmin Śaṅku illustrate effortless benefit issuing from prior aspiration after all conceptual activity has subsided.
Key claims (chapters 1–8, 10 — path register)
The path chapters are doctrinally less central to the wiki but supply the neyārtha scaffolding the framework-as-pedagogy thesis needs. Distinctive emphases of this (Patrul/Nyingma/Kadampa) commentary: the Introduction expounds the text by Nālandā’s “five topics of presentation” (author, sources, tendency, synopsis, purpose) and classifies the BCA as Mahāyāna sūtra teaching; chapter 1 develops the precious-human-life and two-bodhicittas (intention / action, plain / subtle) material with the alchemy/jewel/tree examples; chapter 8 (Meditation) contains the equalising and exchanging self and other practice (vv. 90–103) on which the Williams–Siderits exchange turns — see below; chapter 10 (Dedication) insists, citing Longchenpa, that dedication “sealed” with emptiness only after the fact “is tantamount to a nihilistic view,” and must instead be made free of the concepts of the three spheres.
The equalising-self-and-other verses (commentary on BCA 8.90–103) — the Williams–Siderits locus
The commentary’s treatment of the verses Williams reads as “destroying the bodhisattva path” is a clean Reductionist reading. On the continuity of lives (vv. 97–98), the commentary states outright that “the entity that dies and passes out of life is not the same as that which is born in the succeeding existence,” using the lamp-lighting-lamp image and the verse “Like recitation, flame, and looking glass… / The aggregates continue in their seamless course, / Yet nothing is transferred.” “I” and “other” are “no more than a matter of conceptual labelling” (the horse-sale example: ownership and so suffering-as-mine transfers by mere labelling, “right up to the moment when the deal is struck”). The personal no-self is established precisely by dissolving the “continuum” and the “gathering” into mere imputations (vv. 101–102): “Since continua and gatherings have no existence in themselves, there is no ‘experiencer’ of the suffering… Who ‘owns’ it? No one.” This is the very siderits-reality-altruism-2000 reconstruction (BCA 8 as provisional Reductionism, BCA 9 as the nītārtha corrective), here in its traditional Indo-Tibetan voice — the framework Williams declines to use, supplied verbatim by the commentary Williams was not reading.
Methodology
Word-for-word sabche-structured commentary in the Patrul Rinpoche oral lineage; Kadampa (Ngulchu Thogme) base text for chapters 1–8 and 10; Mipham’s Norbu Ketaka for chapter 9. Nyingma/Rimé in orientation — the colophon’s dedication prays explicitly for the dispelling of sectarian faction. Sources are cited sparingly and by allusion rather than full quotation. Where it engages tenets (chapter 9), it uses the standard four-school doxographic ascent (Vaibhāṣika → Sautrāntika → Cittamātra → Madhyamaka, the last split into Svātantrika and Prāsaṅgika) as a graded hierarchy of progressively subtler views — Mipham’s signature pedagogical framing.
Notable quotations (under 30 words each)
- On the two truths as device (9.106): “The system of the two truths is propounded solely for didactic purposes, as an entry to the path. On the ultimate level, the division… has no place.”
- On the two no-selves (9.41): “There is no difference at all between these two assertions of emptiness: that of the personal No-Self and that of the phenomenal No-Self.”
- On clinging to emptiness (9.33): “Those who ‘have a view’ of voidness / Are barred, they say, from its accomplishment.”
- On emptiness and compassion (9.1, citing Atiśa): “When emptiness is realized, all sin and nonvirtue come to an end and great compassion arises. Emptiness possesses the essence of compassion.”
- On the Reductionist continuum (8.98): “The entity that dies and passes out of life is not the same as that which is born in the succeeding existence.”
Connections
- mipham-introduction-middle-way-2002 — same compiler (Khenpo Kunzang Pelden), same Nyingma circle; the MA commentary is Mipham on Candrakīrti, this is Mipham (via the Norbu Ketaka) on Śāntideva’s chapter 9. Together they give the wiki Mipham on both of the Mahāyāna path/wisdom loci classici.
- siderits-reality-altruism-2000 — the analytic reconstruction of exactly the BCA 8 / BCA 9 graded structure this commentary embodies; the traditional counterpart to Siderits’s neyārtha/nītārtha defence of Śāntideva against Williams.
- shantarakshita-madhyamakalankara — Mipham’s Yogācāra-Madhyamaka two-step and four-school ascent, on which the chapter-9 doxographic frame draws.
- mabja-ornament-of-reason, karmapa-feast-fortunate-1578, dzongsar-khyentse-madhyamakavatara-2003 — fellow subject-side / cognitive-perspective Two-Truths witnesses.